VN Ren'Py Untitled kinetic novel by Midzay [Development Thread]

[Midzay]

Hey guys.
For a long time I have not been able to create artwork. The police seized my entire family's computers because they don't like me being against my government's aggression. My family is still at risk. The police were willing to return the seized tech, but when I informed them that I wanted to check if the tech was working and the data was safe, the police disappeared. The police are not responding to my attorney's inquiries. I've decided that I'm not going to wait for this story to conclude, and I want to post my progress on the new novella here. I can't continue working on my first novel (Hoover's Big Love). It's psychologically difficult for me. And my characters I've been creating individually are now behind bars
I want to move forward.

I was watching a show (in Russian

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) in which a brother and sister are asked indecent questions. At the time 8:27 there was a question about the first kiss. and the sister was surprised that her younger brother hadn't kissed yet.
I thought: they seem to be friends. And when they get home the sister can kiss her brother. To make him believe he's attractive and overcome his shyness.



I imagined how it could happen naturally and truthfully. So I came up with the first scene where the sister fights with her brother to forcefully kiss him. I began to develop the story, and that led me to three scenarios that would seamlessly transition from one to the next. But, I had to move the scenes of the sister abusing her brother into another novella.

 

[Midzay]

The main character: a young man who has not yet had any sexual experience. He hasn't even kissed a girl. I used the character Walther-2. Updated the skin shader to version 8.1 and made my material customization, which I described on YouTube.
I haven't given the guy a name yet. Should I keep the name Walther? It seems complicated to me. What do you think?

 

[Midzay]

The main character's older sister. Unattractive, fat, insecure girl. Plays a big role in her brother's sexual education. She is friends with her brother, though she has occasional outbursts of idiocy towards her brother. She's still mostly kind though.
The character I used is "Noemi".

 

[Midzay]

A girl the protagonist is in love with, but doesn't know how to approach her. She goes to the same school as the protagonist. I think she's one or two years older? Actress: Sahel.

 

[Midzay]

Anal pressure meter. I thought I invented this crazy device. But no, there really is such a device, and it is similar to mine, only bigger and designed to measure sphincter strength.

My device can detect pelvic pressure and sexual tension. It can detect when it has been inserted into the vagina or anus. I can't decide on the fonts on the scoreboard. I'll show you next time.

 

[Midzay]

Redesigned the anal pressure meter scoreboard. Redesigned the ceiling in the first location (I'll show it in the next post). Thought to make the sister of the main character more beautiful. I'll try it, see what happens.

 

[Midzay]

The first location is a school. Wanted to make the school I went to. Searching for the project led to the layout of another school building. Found it in a book from 1922. Tried to find pictures of this building and found a school in Cleveland (Ohio, USA). Unfortunately, this building is now abandoned and deteriorating. I am always saddened by this.

 

[Midzay]

We had a sleepless night. The police returned the computer equipment to our family. They didn't destroy the data, which was a pleasant surprise. My characters are with me now, on the loose. They are impatient and want to get into new footage as soon as possible. I've missed them very much.
For this novel I have enough for two rooms of the school: a corridor and a medical room. I will work out the rest of the rooms as needed. Passed light checks, and fixing modeling errors. I've redone the ceilings.
Started texturing school and filling the rooms with stuff. It's taking up too much time.

 

[Oliz82]

Hello.

I don't know what to think about this project since I'm not into incest but the idea of reassuring then helping the brother seems interesting enough.

The boys model is too puny (maybe too skeletal/stunted). The girls are nice, maybe too young looking.

The anal pressure meter is a good find. It's actually better if the partner find pleasure than just focusing on the protagonist. A vaginal pressure meter should also be created (because I don't think an anal device would be reliable enough).

For the school : not bad but too new/unused. Also, what is that sphere doing in the middle?

Good continuation.

 

[Midzay]

For the school : not bad but too new/unused. Also, what is that sphere doing in the middle?

Hey, buddy Oliz82. Who are you? You feel my thoughts pretty damn deeply.

1/ School is too new - you're absolutely right. It's my pain. To make it real is to waste too much time. I have about 100 synopses recorded in 4 worlds. If I only do each story for 6 months, I'll spend 50 years. That's too long. I want to tell a lot of stories that happen around me.

2/ The “vaginal pressure meter” is made by Sheldon, Penney and Company (this is stated on the anal pressure meter). But it's a device from another world with many stories.

3/ A balloon in the office to test the light and sense of scale. The study is now filling up with objects.

I'm happy to introduce you to one of the four locations in this novella. This is a test render, it will not be part of the script.

I appreciate your comments.

 

[R1k0]

I don't understand why making the older sister unattractive. The guy is ok and his love interest looks really cute.

 

[Midzay]

I don't understand why making the older sister unattractive. The guy is ok and his love interest looks really cute.

I want to explore whether an ugly girl can be made desirable. Her character, her insecurities, are based on her unattractiveness. And how can I explain to the viewer that at the age of 22 she is still a virgin

 

[R1k0]

I want to explore whether an ugly girl can be made desirable. Her character, her insecurities, are based on her unattractiveness. And how can I explain to the viewer that at the age of 22 she is still a virgin

Yeah a story like that makes sense, she's not attractive, she doesn't have a boyfriend, and she directed her sexual energy at her younger brother.

 

[Midzay]

Another novella location: the TV studio for the show Success Stories. Pictured is the show's host, Nancy. Of course she hosts her show with her clothes on. She has a small role, and we won't see her in such an indecent state again. She has her own separate story where she's the main character.

 

[Midzay]

Doing the filling of the school's medical room. I think I'm halfway there.

 

[Midzay]

Below is a picture of the unwrapped room.

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. horizontally so you can appreciate the location (click on the photo to turn it into a panorama). Hmmm... what do you think?


The picture is of the doctor, the owner of the office. She has a small role in this novel. But she has a whole story of her own.
I see some minor errors which I will fix later. To finalize this location I need to check the translation of the texts on the posters (I use Deepl translator). I will publish them in the next post.

 

[Midzay]

I made some medical-themed posters for the location. Guys, if you see any mistakes in the text, let me know.

Student Medical Questionnaire.


I saw a picture of the poster in the window of a cafe (USA). The poster had this crazy text on it. The photo was of poor quality and I passed it by. Then for 2 days I searched in vain for that picture. I had to generate this picture with AI, but I tried to keep the text as I remembered it.


Illustration from a vintage medical book (1900). I used Photoshop to make the manipulation more pleasant for the patient.


Another illustration from a vintage book, this time I just added a caption.



I downloaded some vintage books because they have some really funny drawings in them. Not included in the novel.

 

[Oliz82]

Hello.

I made some medical-themed posters for the location. Guys, if you see any mistakes in the text, let me know.

Student Medical Questionnaire.
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I saw a picture of the poster in the window of a cafe (USA). The poster had this crazy text on it. The photo was of poor quality and I passed it by. Then for 2 days I searched in vain for that picture. I had to generate this picture with AI, but I tried to keep the text as I remembered it.
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Illustration from a vintage medical book (1900). I used Photoshop to make the manipulation more pleasant for the patient.
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Another illustration from a vintage book, this time I just added a caption.
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I downloaded some vintage books because they have some really funny drawings in them. Not included in the novel.
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Nice, that vintage touch.

Is it really necessary for a medical questionnaire to have that much information about sexuality though (it's a porn game but still)?

good continuation.

 

[Midzay]

Is it really necessary for a medical questionnaire to have that much information about sexuality though (it's a porn game but still)?

Thanks, I was thinking the same thing. The main thing in this questionnaire is the girl's name, so that the main character knows her name. The rest of the information doesn't matter. I can make the text image blurry or replace it with “Lora Ipsum” when I render scene "with a monitor". I didn't want to make up a questionnaire in the future, so I made it ahead of time.

Now I'm preparing the last location. It is the floor of the house for three apartments, but for the novel I will fill only one room with furniture. Tomorrow I have to go to another city for 7-9 days and it will stop my work on this location.

 

[fogata]

Hi!! Congrats on your game, i can see you are making progress. Im starting one myself. Can i ask you what software are you using for your renders (enviroments and characters). Ty