VN - Ren'Py - Trophies [v0.035] [roasDev]

[Review for v0.03]
It's pretty good, I find the art style and the premise equally appealing, the sex scenes are nice, and the themes are erotic. But the pacing is a bit too fast; things are poorly explained or not at all; and I feel like the game needs more than just standing in the store day after day.

Most importantly, the game desperately needs a dedicated translator and editor--the grammar's all over the place, but it goes beyond that, about a third of the game is entirely incomprehensible to me.

Overall, it's a pretty good game that's worth the download, but I'm taking away 2 stars because I find legibility to be one of the most important factors in visual novels.

This is the best new game to come along in a long while. The art is fantastic and the writing is good despite the grammatical errors. This game is also a great example of how to get to the action quickly without forsaking character development and story. I hope other devs are paying attention.

A hell of a Demo, As a man who like corruption games this game is Great!
Right now there isn't a whole range of options but I can see where things will lead.
I like the looks of things and hope to see more.

Kinky game; a strong, young potent MC in a world of neglected women.
Pop art style, decent animations
Magical Stamina of MC, and lots of bodily fluids, everywhere.
Statistics like in the best Japanese Hentai games.