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- Thread starter Roastez
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Nice art. Very impressed with all the different outfits and including the variations in the scenes too. Interesting "corruption" mechanic/story premise - kinda reminds me of something, but can't entirely place it.
Protagonist reminds me a bit too much of the typical porn edgelord. Not really my cup of tea, but could be worse.
Plot so far is quite linear and non-interactive. Doesn't really feel like you can influence anything, which given the relativ early stage might or might not matter.
The writing though is pretty bad. Words are used in ways they'd never be used, even if technically with a similar meaning. Everyone's talking like some sort of bot instead of, well, people. Drags down especially the sex scenes quite a bit. Actual errors on top don't help of course.
It's always good to see something that's a bit different from just the generic crowd, and there's certainly potential, but potential isn't worth much if never realized
Protagonist reminds me a bit too much of the typical porn edgelord. Not really my cup of tea, but could be worse.
Plot so far is quite linear and non-interactive. Doesn't really feel like you can influence anything, which given the relativ early stage might or might not matter.
The writing though is pretty bad. Words are used in ways they'd never be used, even if technically with a similar meaning. Everyone's talking like some sort of bot instead of, well, people. Drags down especially the sex scenes quite a bit. Actual errors on top don't help of course.
It's always good to see something that's a bit different from just the generic crowd, and there's certainly potential, but potential isn't worth much if never realized